Cardinals

Below is a poem and a haiku I wrote for an assignment in my writing group. The cardinal is my favorite visitor to our yard, but I love to see them anywhere!

The cardinal in our birdbath.
Take Flight 
 
The cardinal flies past the window and I know it’s melodious sound. 
For me, it is a love song, letting me know I am loved. 
His bright red color is like red lips kissing, touching the heart
And every time I see it I adore it more.
Through him God says, I see you, I know who you are and you are loved.
It reminds me what is important…family, faith, friends.
The fly-by is like a messenger delivering many thoughts saying
I am free, you can be free, take flight, be the adventurous person you are.
But then I sit back, a little anxious that I am being silly...
And writing this poem is like forbidden fruit and not worth anything. 
 
The cardinal at the window feeder.

Another assignment was a writing exercise and I ended up with three words: travel, fly and cardinal. I needed to use those three words to write a haiku.

Traveling by wings
A cardinal can bring much joy-
A bright red fly-by.

8 thoughts on “Cardinals”

  1. Such a beautiful poem Valerie! I too love cardinals and feel a closeness to God as well as hope! Each time I see a cardinal I also feel the presence of those loved ones who have passed! Thank you for sharing 💕

    1. I know you have a love for cardinals too. They are beautiful birds, favored by many. 😉

  2. Thank you for sharing something so pure and real. I cannot tell you what a blessing it was for me today. If we as mere humans can wish for the freedom of a Spirit-led life for our children, it makes sense that God having chosen to make us in His very image, also finds joy in watching us take flight .

  3. I remember those poems and how your love of cardinals shines through the words. Thanks for the beautiful visuals your poetry evoked!

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